Dpz from boom kitty is that you? I looked up okiba crackdown and found this. It’s a really nice one
Dpz from boom kitty is that you? I looked up okiba crackdown and found this. It’s a really nice one
yup, glad you like it
sounds really cool and bouncy. I like how it's got lots of detail, but at around 0:10 there's a little too much going on so it gets kinda messy with the random cymbals and toms. overall it sounds great so far, but there's a little too much. Don't be afraid to keep it simple especially if you start adding more layers to it.
Ah, thanks, I'll be sure to work on this next time. I'm still fairly new to FL Studio, as most of my stuff is pre-made loops, which is for some reason illegal on Newgrounds, despite being what the loops were made for... Making your own song to distribute lmao
I love the chord progression and composition of this. The only thing is the drops are a little empty. It's pretty cool how the growls harmonise main melody, but you need more background like chords and sub-bass. It feels a little rough, i think you should make the main melody synth a little smoother, it feels a little dirty, and maybe lower the volume on it a little to balance everything.
Overall I love the composition and chord progression throughout the song, but there's just a few mixing issues and emptiness that makes the song sound unprofessional. It's really cool tho, I might remake it.
Edit: oh nice lol
im already whitelisted .-.
really cool! Funny, the writers block sorta thing you seem to be having is what i have when trying to practice piano, but not when composing. weird. anyway really nice
Artist strife comes in many aspects. Thanks for the kind words J Bee :D
0:50 my ears just flipped. I like the drop at 1:12. I don't know if it's just your style, but your drops are kinda unexpected, lower the attack or adding a drumroll right before the drops will help. Also the volume change in drop and non drop is too high. overall, pretty nice, good use of panning but needs some mixing and polishing. nice
ya the drops are supposed to come out of nowhere
interesting, kinda creepy. i like the key change
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