Wow, you collabbed with Dj Nate and F-777? Wow! The vocals are amazing and the instrumental is a banger
Wow, you collabbed with Dj Nate and F-777? Wow! The vocals are amazing and the instrumental is a banger
I know right ? Thank you very much :D
Nice! The drumbeat is pretty cool. Progression and tune is a little random tho lol
its a peacefull song remake but thanks ! but im imroving im getting there (:
It’s not even allowed in the game yet lol. If you wanna know how just watch my vid on it tbh
i know
Really cool, and the mixing sounds rather professional. My advice would be to switch the synth for the chords at 0:38 because it sounds too similar to the arpeggios. Also the progression is unusual, switching to a minor chord on the 3rd chord. It sounds strange (scale wise) but I think it’s gives a cool trance feeling to it.
The drop sounds great with the drums and grindy bass, but I wouldn’t really call it dubstep, maybe trap.
Overall this is really nice, my main advice is to make a melody slightly different to the main 3 chords, they get a little uninteresting, so some contrast would be great.
Great job! Imma scout you. You won’t be able to use your music in gd yet, but go ahead and message robtop, that’s how I got whitelisted.
Good luck on your newgrounds/gd journey!
Thanks for the detailed feedback! I know practically no music theory, so I can understand how there's a couple of flaws in the song :D
Not bad, a little messy and a little random, but if it were a little neater it would sound like some roblox lobby background music or something lol
I learned you could use different instruments in Chrome Music Labs.
Really nice track.
Ty <3
This is really cool. (Deleted lol)
Thanks!
really nice! My only advice would be to add a little bass, but i guess it's not necessary if it wasn't in the original song. nice job
Thx!!
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