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awesome, especially 0:18 where you cut out the low frequencies. doesn't sound like techno tho, it's too fast and upbeat.

sounds cool, i like the chords and the drumbeat is cool, sounds like trap. however the snare sounding thing at 0:37 seems too repetitive, maybe pull out every 1st or second one. 0:56 love those chords and that synth. The drop buildup is cool and the drum fill right before the drop is cool too. the drop is nice, a little messy, but i like it. In between the first and second drop you could put in a little chill section, that's what i usually do, that way it has a story feel to it. the second drop and after has a synth that place the same note again and again, it get's repetitive. after it gets taken out, the rest of the song is great. nice

OmegaT responds:

Hey! Thanks for your review!
Unfortunately for this specific song and other one I uploaded (Rememberance), I've lost the original FLPs.
I will keep the advice in mind for future tracks, appreciate it

OmegaT

sounds really cool and bouncy. I like how it's got lots of detail, but at around 0:10 there's a little too much going on so it gets kinda messy with the random cymbals and toms. overall it sounds great so far, but there's a little too much. Don't be afraid to keep it simple especially if you start adding more layers to it.

FireTBonXBon responds:

Ah, thanks, I'll be sure to work on this next time. I'm still fairly new to FL Studio, as most of my stuff is pre-made loops, which is for some reason illegal on Newgrounds, despite being what the loops were made for... Making your own song to distribute lmao

I love the chord progression and composition of this. The only thing is the drops are a little empty. It's pretty cool how the growls harmonise main melody, but you need more background like chords and sub-bass. It feels a little rough, i think you should make the main melody synth a little smoother, it feels a little dirty, and maybe lower the volume on it a little to balance everything.
Overall I love the composition and chord progression throughout the song, but there's just a few mixing issues and emptiness that makes the song sound unprofessional. It's really cool tho, I might remake it.

Edit: oh nice lol

ElectrifyXD responds:

im already whitelisted .-.

sounds good as background music. Not exactly spooky, more so sneaky.

Really nice remix, but some of the fast drum parts feel a little messy with the rest of the song.

really cool. i really like the growls/dubstep at the drop and the buildup. I like how you have those short drumnbass breaks, but they don't really fit the repetitive kick and snare, you should add a few changes in the rhythm to make the song more interesting, as well as some other layers because it feels kinda empty. overall, nice, just need a little rhythmic variety and more layers.

AlienNinjaGD responds:

thank you!
i didnt take a lot of time for the melodies coz i was amazed how the drop turned, i may fix it up

Sick drop makes me gotta pee so bad and not wanna go camping anyway

Love this

Wow, the tune and dubstep sound really awesome together, and i'm glad you're starting to incorperate vocals into your song. however as many others have said, they're slightly out of tune to the rest of the song, but otherwise it's really nice. The end is pretty cool too, tho slightly repetitive throughout. overall it's just those two things and apart from that i would give 5. Nice

Vortonox responds:

Ty man for the feedback. :)
Yes, I'm still learning.

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